Antigone Cadmus

Hey, ballerina13! I'm Sakura, and I'll be your reviewer for today. :wink: Soo, right now there are far too many errors to critique this. I normally do extremely in-depth, nit-picky ...

Hey, winie603! Here (finally!), as requested! Well, eleven is very young, so I'm going to go easy on you! Instead of doing a mean, nasty, nit-picky review, I'm going to ...

Hey, Kalia Maria! Here (finally) as requested. :oops: I'm so, so sorry that this took me so long to review. I was on vacation for a week (away from YWS!) ...

Hey! I am so sorry about the wait! I was on vacation, and forgot to close my Will Review for Food thread. :oops: I'll review this anyway. :oops: Because of ...

Hey, Koala! Welcome to Young Writers Society! It's a great place to get critiques for your work, so you should return the favor! It's a loose "rule" here that for ...

Hey, Winie603! This story looks really good, and I am sure that you'd like to get lots of reviews on your work. Many users here on Young Writers Society give ...

Hey, Rosey, my new fellow purp! :wink: Ha, I can tell that you meant the dialogue grammar to be like that. I don't know why someone would comment on a ...

Hey, Pretty 'n' Werewolf! This looks like it has a lot of potential, but it is overshadowed by your grammar. Review your basic knowledge of grammar. You hardly ever use ...

Hmmm, did you want a grammar nit-pickish review, Otto? Because I can come back and give you one. ^_^ Right now, there is only one thing that bothers me. I ...

Heya, Peanut! Here as requested! orange and red, resembling the hue of blood. Personally, I really don't think the sunset is the color of blood. Blood is more of a ...

Heh, I absolutely abhorred this book. I normally love classics, but I found Fitzgerald's characters to be annoying and unbelievable. The book really had no plot and was mind-numbingly boring. ...

Hey, Lord Anzius. Hmm, well even though you didn't follow my rules in my thread, I'll review this anyway. :wink: In my rules, I stated that I didn't like to ...

Hey, Arcaus. First of all, please rate this work PG-13 or R. Not only does it have some language (yes. "damn" is considered language), it has some sexual references as ...

Hey, Rosey! Here as requested! First of all, this is much improved! Only a few nit-picks left: Making her way to the art section, Claire still had to weave around ...

Hmmmmm. I just wanted to give you a quick lesson on apostrophes. Matt's dog : This needs an apostrophe. The apostrophe signifies possession. The dog belongs to Matt. Another way ...